Constructive Criticism, please?

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    sebeach2 · Member ·

    Hi, guys…I’m blogging to practice writing for a public audience. I’d appreciate some constructive criticism, if you’ve got it!

    http://ruminationsincommunication.wordpress.com/

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    timethief · Member ·

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    antheastunning · Member ·

    . . . Okay . . . anyway, here is that constructive criticism that you asked for!

    I really like your blog layout. It’s simple and easy to navigate. I like that there’s only one column. I think you could change the background to something less zoomed in and if possible, change the colour of the words? They might be a little light for some people.

    I like your posts. You write intelligently and about interesting topics. I liked your post about Counterclockwise. I might buy it!

    I especially liked your quote about debates. You said,

    “The point of a debate, usually, is to reaffirm everyone’s beliefs, and maybe win over some fence-sitters.”

    This is so true, but I’d never thought of debates in this way before!

    I like that your writing has a recognisable voice. I wish that you would expand your About page so I can know more about you. Apart from that, just keep doing what you’re doing! :)

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