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  vivekkitbhu · Member · Jun 27, 2013 at 7:19 am

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  http://vivekkitbhu.wordpress.com/2013/06/26/story-of-two-countries-2/

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  raincoaster · Member · Jun 27, 2013 at 7:31 am

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  wat

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  vivekkitbhu · Member · Jun 27, 2013 at 9:24 am

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  I want feedback whether the way of writing make sense?